Breaking News!! Iqbal has escaped! While no one was watching, he climbed up the wall, squeezed through the little tiny window in the back work room, and managed to jump to the ground. When he landed he sprang to his feet, and ran through the neighbors garden. He climbed up over the old stone fence and jumped to his freedom! Where will he go? What's going to happen next?
i think he is going to get his dad and he will help the other kids escape...
ReplyDeletei think he will run to his family or get the police and send them to the sweat shop so every kid can be sent home to their family and if one or 5 kids dont have parents they will go to adoption center. and hussain kan will be sent to jail
ReplyDeleteI think Iqbal is going to come back one night and help them escape. Maybe he will send the police but i don't think so because Hussain will just give the police money and the police will be on Hussain's side. I hope Iqbal gets to help the other kids in the factory escape. Good Luck Iqbal!!
ReplyDeleteI think iqball will get help from the police station and lead them to the sweatshop. There he will tell the the police where the children are and Hussain kan will go to jail. Then all the children will get back to there parents.
ReplyDeleteI'm guessing that Iqbal is going to get the police and go to hussains house to get him arrested or something similar to that.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, fifth grader is Solane
ReplyDeleteI think he is doing the right thing because he might get help and then get all of the other children out of the sweatshop. Hussain Khan might try to hunt him down while the other children are still working in the sweatshop. I hope he can do something to save all the other kids.
ReplyDeleteI think he will go to the police and tell them that there is a lot of child labor and give the police the names of the Masters and their addresses. Then Iqbal will try to find his father and tell him what happened to him and that he misses him, and he will tell him about the slates and the tomb, and then Iqbal will stay with his family.
ReplyDeleteIt was very brave of Iqbal to escape the carpet factory, he could get in a lot of trouble if he got caught. Though if he can get help to free himself and his friends it would be worth any pain that he might be caused in the process. I think Iqbal has gone to get some help from the people who free child slaves.
ReplyDeleteI think he will sue Hussain Khan the master for treating the children so bad. He will tell the poice and they will take Hussain Khan to jail for his whole life time. Then Iqbal will be able to go to school because he won't be working so much.
ReplyDeletejuan nice really nice comment i think it should of been a little longer
ReplyDeleteI think he will go to his other master and try to bail his other friends out but as he does this he dosent know he's being watched by his master as soon as iqbal has all the kids attention the old master grabs him by the arm takes a knife and threatens to kill him if he tries to attempt this once again right when his old master was going to let him go he remembered how he escaped from him. He remembered how he took the knife he was holding and killed his beloved wife just to get away. His old master changed his mind about letting him go..... SO HE TOOK THE KNIFE AND STABEED HIM!!! in the stomach 3 times Iqbal screamed a bloodcurling sream. after the screaming stopped a huge silence fell across the room,Iqbal fell limp to the floor the master saw the blood on the knife and remembered his wife he smiled and said this is what you get for killing my wife!!!!! "Now margaret" he says ( Margaret his maid/ slave) "Take this ungrateful kid and throw him in the tomb and let him bleed to death" "yes sir" she whispers to iqbal i am so sorry for this this wasnt meant to happen im sorry" Then secretely she got a pillow one of the finest he has and took it to the tomb for Iqbal Margaret wished that she could bandage him up but she couldnt cause if she does the master will kill her."try to sleep well my child".......Back at Hussains sweatshop hussain and his wife saw that he was missing he screamed "ALL RIGHT WHO LET HIM OUT WHO DID!!! IF NO ONE SAYS A THING A WILL KILL 2 KIDS IN 30 MINUTES OR EVEN NOW IF I WANT TO SO SPEAK UP NOW!! hussain was starting to lose his patients so he grabbed karim and said "since no one talks he gets to go" "Susan darling get me my pistol please so i can blow up his head" "but sweetie i dont know if you should do this i mean his only a kid let him go now" "no sweetie if you dont let me kill him i will have to kill you im sorry" "ok im sorry karim" so susan got his pistol and filled it up with amo and pulled the trigger here you go hussain" "ok everyone say bye to karim BOOOOOOOOMMMMMM he shoots him "No karim karimmmm why master why he was just doing his job why" said Fatima..........back at the old masters house iqbal was there lying stiller than a rock the old master went down to get him when he saw him lying there he saw the pillow he thought ill deal with her later as he was dragging iqbal across the floor he showed them iqbal he made margaret fell his pulse "hes gone Master" the master smiled and said "good now margaret burry him"
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